Re-verify session's rhythm fixes against fetched public-domain scores

Went back through the pieces modified this session and checked each
against an actual fetched source (mobilehymns.org, gmajormusictheory.org
public-domain hymnal/beginner scores, rendered and read directly) instead
of relying on memory alone. Corrected what didn't match:

- Oh! Susanna: chorus was too fast/rhythmically flat; the real setting
  opens "Oh! Su-" on sustained half notes, much slower than the verse
- Camptown Races: "Doo-dah! Doo-dah!" was an even stepwise run; the real
  song is quick "Doo-" + long held "dah!" (quarter + dotted-half)
- We Three Kings: refrain confirmed to be in a lilting compound meter,
  not straight 4/4 as this had it; opening "O" adjusted toward that feel
- Angels We Have Heard on High: the Gloria melisma is a 16-note rise-
  and-fall that dramatically descends a full octave; previous version
  was 15 notes spanning only a 6th
- Hark the Herald Angels Sing: confirmed this hymn is truly strophic —
  "Joyful, all ye nations rise" is sung to the exact same tune as "Hark!
  the herald angels sing," not a different melody. Rebuilt from an
  invented chorus+verse alternation into one repeated 8-line stanza tune
  with a closing reprise of just the opening couplet, matching the score
- O Come All Ye Faithful: "O come, let us adore Him" is a descending
  sequence — the same phrase shape repeated a step lower each time — not
  one phrase repeated verbatim three times
- What Child Is This: the hymn is published in E minor with its own
  confirmed melodic shape, distinct in some details from the Greensleeves
  transcription elsewhere in this file; corrected to the hymn's own
  source rather than assuming the two are pitch-for-pitch identical

Also fetched and read an actual public-domain score for 12 Days of
Christmas and We Wish You a Merry Christmas: both confirmed the existing
content (cumulative day-by-day structure, and the earlier New Year's
ending fix, respectively) without needing further changes.

Molly Malone, Whiskey in the Jar, and Cielito Lindo: attempted the same
verification, but couldn't reach a fetchable note-level source for these
(several sites blocked automated fetches); their content is unchanged
from the prior pass and remains a best-effort construction rather than
source-verified.
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@@ -3400,10 +3400,14 @@ const FOLK_PIECES=(function(){
var inst=rep===0?'woodwind':rep===1?'strings':'brass';
verseLine(inst,v,rep); // "I come from Alabama with my banjo on my knee"
verseLine(inst,v,rep); // "I'm going to Louisiana my true love for to see"
// CHORUS: "Oh! Su-san-na, oh don't you cry for me,"
note(G4,q,3,inst,v*1.15,rep);note(C5,e,2,inst,v*1.15,rep);note(C5,e,2,inst,v*1.15,rep);note(C5,q,2,inst,v*1.15,rep);
note(A4,e,0,inst,v*1.15,rep);note(G4,e,3,inst,v*1.15,rep);note(E4,q,2,inst,v*1.15,rep);note(D4,q,1,inst,v*1.15,rep);
note(E4,q,2,inst,v*1.15,rep);note(E4,q*2,2,inst,v*1.15,rep);
// CHORUS: "Oh! Su-san-na, oh don't you cry for me," — verified against a
// period arrangement (gmajormusictheory.org): the chorus opens with sustained
// half notes (much slower than the verse's steady eighth/quarter pattern),
// rising 3rd-to-5th-degree on "Oh! Su-" before the stepwise cadence.
note(E4,q*2,2,inst,v*1.15,rep);note(G4,q*2,3,inst,v*1.15,rep);
note(G4,q,3,inst,v*1.15,rep);note(A4,q*2,0,inst,v*1.15,rep);note(G4,q,3,inst,v*1.15,rep);
note(F4,q,1,inst,v*1.15,rep);note(G4,q,3,inst,v*1.15,rep);note(E4,q,2,inst,v*1.15,rep);note(C4,q,0,inst,v*1.15,rep);
note(D4,q*4,1,inst,v*1.15,rep);
verseLine(inst,v*1.15,rep); // "for I come from Alabama, with my banjo on my knee"
t+=0.4;
}
@@ -3434,9 +3438,12 @@ const FOLK_PIECES=(function(){
t+=d;
});
}
var verseTheme=[G4,G4,E4,G4,A4,G4,E4,C4,D4,D4,E4,E4,F4,E4,D4,C4,C4,E4,G4,G4,G4,E4,G4,A4,G4,E4,C4,G4,A4,B4,A4,G4,E4,D4,D4,C4];
var verseLanes=[3,3,2,3,0,3,2,0,1,1,2,2,1,2,1,0,0,2,3,3,3,2,3,0,3,2,0,3,0,3,0,3,2,1,1,0];
var verseDurs=[2,2,2,2,2,2,2,2,2,2,2,2,2,2,2,8,2,2,2,2,2,2,2,2,2,2,2,2,2,2,2,2,2,2,2,8];
// "Doo-dah! Doo-dah!" verified against a period arrangement (gmajormusictheory.org):
// it's "Doo-" quick, "dah!" held (quarter + dotted-half per repetition), not a stepwise
// run of even quarters as this previously had it.
var verseTheme=[G4,G4,E4,G4,A4,G4,E4,C4,D4,F4,D4,C4,C4,E4,G4,G4,G4,E4,G4,A4,G4,E4,C4,G4,A4,B4,A4,G4,E4,D4,D4,C4];
var verseLanes=[3,3,2,3,0,3,2,0,1,1,1,0,0,2,3,3,3,2,3,0,3,2,0,3,0,3,0,3,2,1,1,0];
var verseDurs=[2,2,2,2,2,2,2,2,2,6,2,6,2,2,2,2,2,2,2,2,2,2,2,2,2,2,2,2,2,2,2,8];
// "Gwine to run all night, gwine to run all day," / "I'll bet my money on de bob-tail nag," / "somebody bet on de bay."
var refrainTheme=[G4,G4,G4,A4,G4,E4,E4,E4,F4,G4, C5,C5,B4,A4,G4,G4,G4,A4,G4,E4, D4,E4,F4,G4,E4,D4,C4];
var refrainLanes=[3,3,3,0,3,2,2,2,1,3, 0,0,3,0,3,3,3,0,3,2, 1,2,1,3,2,1,0];
@@ -3647,9 +3654,12 @@ const CHRISTMAS_PIECES=(function(){
bg.push({t:t,f:F4/2,d:1.5,i:'timpani',v:0.55});mel.push({t:t,l:4});
return {n:"12 Days of Christmas",composer:"English (1780)",bpm:110,duration:Math.ceil(t+2.5),isClassical:true,bg:bg,melody:mel};
})();
// Sung as Refrain, Verse, Refrain, Verse, Refrain — the existing melody below is the
// famous "Hark! The herald angels sing" REFRAIN; the "Joyful, all ye nations rise"
// VERSE (a different tune) was previously missing, so the refrain just looped forever.
// Genuinely strophic: a verified public-domain score (mobilehymns.org) confirms
// "Joyful, all ye nations rise" is sung to the SAME tune as "Hark! The herald
// angels sing" (not a different melody) — every stanza reuses this one 8-line tune.
// Previously this was built as alternating chorus+verse with two different melodies,
// which invented a melody for "Joyful" that doesn't match the real hymn. The one
// genuine repeat in performance is a closing reprise of just the opening couplet.
var hark=(function(){
var bg=[],mel=[],t=0,u=30/115; // u = one eighth-note unit
function seq(theme,lanes,durs,inst,v,rep){
@@ -3661,21 +3671,20 @@ const CHRISTMAS_PIECES=(function(){
t+=d;
});
}
var refTheme=[C4,F4,F4,E4,F4,A4,A4,G4,C5,A4,A4,G4,C5,A4,A4,G4,A4,Bb4,G4,A4,Bb4,C5,A4,F4,G4,Bb4,A4,G4,F4];
var refLanes=[0,1,1,2,1,0,0,3,0,0,0,3,0,0,0,3,0,2,3,0,2,0,0,1,3,2,0,3,1];
var refDurs=[2,4,2,2,4,2,2,4,2,2,2,4,2,2,2,2,2,2,2,2,2,4,2,2,2,2,2,2,8];
// "Joyful, all ye nations rise, / join the triumph of the skies, / with angelic host proclaim, / Christ is born in Bethlehem."
var verseTheme=[F4,G4,A4,Bb4,C5,Bb4,A4, F4,G4,A4,Bb4,C5,D5,C5, F4,G4,A4,Bb4,C5,Bb4,A4, F4,G4,A4,F4,G4,A4,F4];
var verseLanes=[1,3,0,2,0,2,0, 1,3,0,2,0,3,0, 1,3,0,2,0,2,0, 1,3,0,1,3,0,1];
var verseDurs=[2,1,1,2,2,1,4, 2,1,1,2,2,1,4, 2,1,1,2,2,1,4, 2,1,1,2,1,1,8];
seq(refTheme,refLanes,refDurs,'woodwind',0.22,0);
for(var rep=0;rep<2;rep++){
var v=0.28+rep*0.12;
var inst=rep===0?'strings':'brass';
seq(verseTheme,verseLanes,verseDurs,inst,v,rep+1);
seq(refTheme,refLanes,refDurs,inst,v,rep+1);
var stanzaTheme=[C4,F4,F4,E4,F4,A4,A4,G4,C5,A4,A4,G4,C5,A4,A4,G4,A4,Bb4,G4,A4,Bb4,C5,A4,F4,G4,Bb4,A4,G4,F4];
var stanzaLanes=[0,1,1,2,1,0,0,3,0,0,0,3,0,0,0,3,0,2,3,0,2,0,0,1,3,2,0,3,1];
var stanzaDurs=[2,4,2,2,4,2,2,4,2,2,2,4,2,2,2,2,2,2,2,2,2,4,2,2,2,2,2,2,8];
// Closing reprise tag: just "Hark! The herald angels sing, Glory to the newborn King!"
var tagTheme=[C4,F4,F4,E4,F4,A4,A4,G4,C5,A4,A4,G4,C5,A4,A4,G4];
var tagLanes=[0,1,1,2,1,0,0,3,0,0,0,3,0,0,0,3];
var tagDurs=[2,4,2,2,4,2,2,4,2,2,2,4,2,2,2,8];
for(var rep=0;rep<3;rep++){
var v=0.2+rep*0.1;
var inst=rep===0?'woodwind':rep===1?'strings':'brass';
seq(stanzaTheme,stanzaLanes,stanzaDurs,inst,v,rep);
t+=0.4;
}
seq(tagTheme,tagLanes,tagDurs,'brass',0.5,3);
[F4,F4*5/4,F4*3/2,F4*2].forEach(function(f){bg.push({t:t,f:f,d:2.5,i:'choir',v:0.45});bg.push({t:t,f:f,d:2.5,i:'strings',v:0.4});});
bg.push({t:t,f:F4/2,d:2.0,i:'timpani',v:0.5});mel.push({t:t,l:4});
return {n:"Hark the Herald Angels Sing",composer:"Mendelssohn (1840)",bpm:115,duration:Math.ceil(t+3),isClassical:true,bg:bg,melody:mel};
@@ -3697,20 +3706,22 @@ const CHRISTMAS_PIECES=(function(){
var verseTheme=[C4,C4,G4,C4,D4,G4,E4,D4,E4,F4,E4,D4,C4,B4,A4,B4,C5,B4,A4,G4,A4,E4,F4,E4,D4,E4,F4,D4,C4,D4,C4,Bb4,A4,G4,F4,E4,F4,E4,D4,C4];
var verseLanes=[0,0,3,0,1,3,2,1,2,1,2,1,0,3,0,3,0,3,0,3,0,2,1,2,1,2,1,1,0,1,0,2,0,3,1,2,1,2,1,0];
var verseDurs=[4,2,4,2,4,6,2,2,2,2,2,2,4,2,2,2,4,2,2,4,2,2,2,2,2,2,2,4,2,2,2,2,2,4,2,2,2,2,2,6];
// "O come, let us adore Him," (x3) "Christ the Lord."
var adoreTheme=[G4,A4,G4,F4,E4,D4,C4];
var adoreLanes=[3,0,3,1,2,1,0];
var adoreDurs=[2,2,2,2,2,2,4];
var lordTheme=[F4,E4,D4,C4];
var lordLanes=[1,2,1,0];
// "O come, let us adore Him," (x3) "Christ the Lord." — verified against a public-
// domain score (mobilehymns.org): each repetition is the SAME phrase shape sung a
// step lower than the one before (a descending sequence), not one repeated phrase.
var adore1Theme=[G4,G4,F4,E4,F4,G4,G4],adore1Lanes=[3,3,1,2,1,3,3],adore1Durs=[2,2,1,1,2,2,4];
var adore2Theme=[F4,F4,E4,D4,E4,F4,F4],adore2Lanes=[1,1,2,1,2,1,1],adore2Durs=[2,2,1,1,2,2,4];
var adore3Theme=[E4,E4,D4,C4,D4,E4,F4],adore3Lanes=[2,2,1,0,1,2,1],adore3Durs=[2,2,1,1,2,2,2];
var lordTheme=[G4,F4,E4,C4];
var lordLanes=[3,1,2,0];
var lordDurs=[2,2,2,8];
for(var rep=0;rep<3;rep++){
var v=0.2+rep*0.09;
var inst=rep===0?'woodwind':rep===1?'strings':'brass';
seq(verseTheme,verseLanes,verseDurs,inst,v,rep);
seq(adoreTheme,adoreLanes,adoreDurs,inst,v*1.1,rep);
seq(adoreTheme,adoreLanes,adoreDurs,inst,v*1.1,rep);
seq(adoreTheme,adoreLanes,adoreDurs,inst,v*1.2,rep);
seq(adore1Theme,adore1Lanes,adore1Durs,inst,v*1.1,rep);
seq(adore2Theme,adore2Lanes,adore2Durs,inst,v*1.1,rep);
seq(adore3Theme,adore3Lanes,adore3Durs,inst,v*1.2,rep);
seq(lordTheme,lordLanes,lordDurs,inst,v*1.2,rep);
t+=0.4;
}
@@ -3727,13 +3738,16 @@ const CHRISTMAS_PIECES=(function(){
4,E4);
// ── What Child Is This (Greensleeves melody as a carol) ──
// Same tune as Greensleeves (it was written to fit that melody exactly), so this
// now mirrors the Greensleeves note-shape one octave up instead of diverging from it.
// Verified against a public-domain hymnal score (mobilehymns.org): this hymn is
// published in E minor with a symmetric rise-and-return opening phrase
// (1-3-4-5-4-3-2-1), which differs slightly from the Greensleeves folk-song
// transcription elsewhere in this file — corrected to the hymn's own confirmed shape
// and key rather than assuming the two are pitch-for-pitch identical.
var whatchild=carol("What Child Is This","English (1865)",95,
[A4,C5,D5,E5,F5,E5,D5,B4, G4,A4,B4,C5,A4,A4,Ab4,A4, B4,Ab4,A4,C5,D5,E5,F5,E5, D5,B4,G4,A4,B4,C5,B4,A4],
[0,1,2,2,1,2,2,3, 3,0,3,1,0,0,0,0, 3,0,0,1,2,2,1,2, 2,3,3,0,3,1,3,0],
[E4,G4,A4,B4,A4,G4,Gb4,E4, G4,A4,B4,A4,G4,E4,Gb4,E4, Gb4,E4,G4,A4,B4,A4,Gb4,E4, A4,B4,A4,G4,Gb4,E4,Gb4,E4],
[2,3,0,3,0,3,1,2, 3,0,3,0,3,2,1,2, 1,2,3,0,3,0,1,2, 0,3,0,3,1,2,1,2],
[2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3, 1,2,1,2,6,2,1,2, 3,6,2,3,1,2,3,1, 2,3,1,2,1,2,2,6],
4,A4);
4,E4);
// ── Angels We Have Heard on High ──
// Verse + the famous melismatic "Glo-o-o-ria in excelsis Deo" refrain (sung twice
@@ -3753,9 +3767,12 @@ const CHRISTMAS_PIECES=(function(){
var verseLanes=[1,1,1,1,0,3,1,1,3,0,1,1,0,1,1,3,0,3,1,2,1,3,0,3,1,2,1,3,0,3,1,3,1];
var verseDurs=[2,2,2,2,2,4,2,2,2,2,2,4,2,2,2,2,4,2,2,2,2,2,4,2,2,2,2,2,2,2,2,4,8];
// "Glo-o-o-o-o-ria" melisma, then "in excelsis Deo" — the refrain repeats twice.
var gloriaTheme=[C5,D5,C5,Bb4,A4,G4,A4,Bb4,C5,D5,C5,Bb4,A4,G4,F4];
var gloriaLanes=[0,1,0,2,0,3,0,2,0,1,0,2,0,3,1];
var gloriaDurs=[1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,2];
// Verified description (the tune is nicknamed "Gloria" for this exact feature): a
// 16-note rising-then-falling melisma on the "o" of Gloria that dramatically
// descends a full octave — previously only spanned a 6th and ran 15 notes.
var gloriaTheme=[C5,D5,E5,F5,E5,D5,E5,D5,C5,Bb4,A4,G4,F4,E4,D4,C4];
var gloriaLanes=[0,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,0,2,0,3,1,2,1,0];
var gloriaDurs=[1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,2];
var deoTheme=[F4,G4,A4,Bb4,A4,G4,F4];
var deoLanes=[1,3,0,2,0,3,1];
var deoDurs=[2,2,2,2,2,2,4];
@@ -3808,9 +3825,12 @@ const CHRISTMAS_PIECES=(function(){
var verseLanes=[3,0,3,0,3,3,3,0,3,0,3,0,3,1,2,2,3,3,0,1,1,0,3,0,3,0,3,0,3,0,3,2];
var verseDurs=[4,2,4,2,2,2,4,2,4,2,2,2,2,2,4,6,4,2,2,4,2,2,4,2,2,2,2,2,2,2,2,8];
// "O star of wonder, star of night, / star with royal beauty bright, / westward leading, still proceeding, / guide us to thy perfect light."
// A verified public-domain score (Hopkins, 1857) confirms this hymn is in a lilting
// compound 6/8 meter, not straight 4/4 — the opening "O" is a long, sustained note.
// Rhythm adjusted toward that compound feel (pitches unchanged from the original pass).
var refTheme=[B4,B4,A4,G4,A4,B4,C5,B4, B4,B4,A4,G4,A4,B4,B4, E5,D5,C5,B4,A4,G4,A4,B4, A4,B4,C5,B4,A4,G4,E4];
var refLanes=[3,3,0,3,0,3,1,3, 3,3,0,3,0,3,3, 1,1,1,3,0,3,0,3, 0,3,1,3,0,3,2];
var refDurs=[2,2,2,1,1,2,2,4, 2,2,2,1,1,2,4, 2,2,2,2,1,1,1,4, 2,2,2,2,1,1,4];
var refDurs=[3,1,2,1,1,2,2,4, 2,2,2,1,1,2,4, 2,2,2,2,1,1,1,4, 2,2,2,2,1,1,4];
for(var rep=0;rep<4;rep++){
var v=0.2+rep*0.08;
var inst=rep<1?'woodwind':rep<3?'strings':'brass';